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Stop waiting days for feedback. Get instant, sentence-by-sentence AI marking on your narratives and persuasive texts based on official NSW Selective rubrics.
Practice Material
Sample Writing Prompts
Don't practice with random internet topics. We provide a curated library of high-stakes narrative and persuasive prompts, specifically engineered to test the genres, themes, and question types found in recent NSW Selective exams.
The Broken Vase
"Write a narrative about a time when a mistake turned into an opportunity."
Stimulus: An image of a broken ceramic vase being repaired with gold lacquer (Kintsugi).
Digital Connection
"Is social media bringing us closer together or driving us further apart? Write a persuasive text arguing your point of view."
Proven Results
Transform your writing
Witness the transformation. By identifying weak verbs, redundant phrasing, and structural issues, our feedback helps students turn a 'Band 6' draft into a 'Band 10' masterpiece.
"Write a persuasive paragraph arguing for or against allowing calculators in all mathematics exams."
"I think calculators are good. They help you do math faster and you don't make small mistakes. Everyone should use them in exams because it is easier and better for students."
- Repetitive sentence starts
- Basic vocabulary ("good", "easier")
"Integrating calculators into all mathematics examinations would significantly enhance computational accuracy and allow students to focus on complex problem-solving. By embracing these tools, we equip learners for real-world applications where higher-order thinking is prioritized over repetitive arithmetic."
- Advanced persuasive terminology
- Varied sentence structures
- Stronger logical progression
How it's Marked
To score high, you need to know exactly how you're being graded. Our system evaluates every attempt against official NSW Selective standards, breaking down your performance so you can see precisely where to gain extra marks.
Content & Ideas
5 marksCreativity, relevance, and depth of ideas
Structure & Organization
5 marksFlow, paragraphing, and text structure
Language & Vocabulary
5 marksWord choice and sentence variety
Grammar & Mechanics
5 marksSpelling, punctuation, and grammar
Instant Feedback
We fix the mistakes that cost marks
Explore our free skill guides to learn more about these common errors.
Vivid Verbs
Stop listing emotions. Learn to describe physical reactions and sensory details that make your writing come alive.
Weak Vocabulary
Replace basic words like "said" or "went" with high-modality alternatives that demonstrate sophistication.
Structure & Flow
Fix pacing issues and disjointed paragraphs. Our AI ensures your narrative has a clear orientation, complication, and resolution.
Deep Analysis
See what expert feedback looks like
Generic feedback doesn't help you improve. Our system acts as a dedicated 24/7 tutor, analyzing your submission sentence-by-sentence to catch subtle errors in tone, modality, and cohesion that standard grammar checkers miss.
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The wind howled through the trees, shaking the old windows of the house. I sat there, looking at the clock. It was late. Suddenly, a loud bang came from upstairs.
Strengths
- Established mood early
- Correct punctuation usage
Areas for Improvement
- Vary sentence structure
- Use higher modality verbs
Better feedback, faster
Everything you need to score higher
The feedback loop is the fastest way to learn. Traditional tutoring forces you to wait 7 days between attempts. Aris Academy allows you to write, get feedback, and improve instantly—accelerating your progress by weeks or months.
- Instant Marking
Receive a score out of 20 immediately after submitting. No more waiting for next week's class.
- Detailed Annotations
Our AI highlights specific sentences and suggests improvements for vocabulary, sentence structure, and cohesion.
- Performance Tracking
Track your improvement over time across key criteria: Content, Structure, Vocabulary, and Grammar.
The Writing Gym
Isolate and Master Skills
You don't train for a marathon by running 42km every day. You do sprints, hills, and strength training. The Writing Gym isolates specific skills like "Show, Don't Tell", "Sentence Variety", and "Punctuation" so you can master them one by one.
The technique: Instead of telling readers how someone feels, show it through physical actions and sensory details.
"She was nervous."
"Her fingers drummed against her thigh, and she couldn't stop glancing at the clock."
Your Turn
Transform this sentence: "He was angry."
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Frequently Asked Questions
Traditional tutoring gives feedback once a week and costs $150-200/hour. Aris Academy provides instant feedback on every attempt, so students can practice and improve continuously. Research shows deliberate practice with immediate feedback is more effective than delayed corrections.
ChatGPT gives generic advice. Our system is specifically trained on NSW selective test marking criteria and focuses on the exact skills that markers actually look for across Reading, Writing, Math, and Thinking.
The NSW Selective test consists of four parts: Reading, Writing, Mathematical Reasoning, and Thinking Skills. Each section requires a unique set of strategies and skills. We have specialized modules for all four to ensure complete preparation.
Absolutely. Our platform adapts to the student's level. We break down complex concepts into small, manageable steps, providing instant feedback that builds confidence and real understanding.
Research suggests 15-20 minutes of focused practice is more effective than hour-long sessions. We recommend short, frequent sessions. Our platform is designed to make this consistency easy and engaging.
NSW advises against "hot-housing." Our approach is different—we teach fundamental skills that improve all-around academic ability, not just test tricks. These skills are valuable for high school and beyond.